It's been two days of revision at the sentence level. It had gotten so that whenever someone said something to me, I'd see their words as if they were a strip of closed captioning. Then I'd add commas and rearrange phrases. It had to stop. I had to clear my brain.
And now, after a night of dancing and lovely flirting at Wild Iris Books, I don't care if you run your sentences on it won't even make me blink. To seriously dance will remove all my worries about split infinitives, and upon arriving home, even dangling modifiers left my mind.
Well, I and those dangling modifiers I brought home with me are going to bed. Sweet Dreams, all.





