Well, not done, done. It doesn't have a title, one paragraph transition is so problematic that I'm thinking perhaps the whole section about gagging has to come out, I use the word "perhaps" way too many times, some of the sentences are overwrought, and I'm thinking perhaps (g) the tone jerks around too much. But it has a beginning, middle, and what I right now think is a perfect end. I got to have that surge of joyful completion as I smacked out the letters of the final word. (Which was "that." You had to be there.)
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